Missing

by rrrrrrr   Dec 12, 2005


Somethings missing, but I cant recall,
It's too late to find it, I'm starting to fall.

It's gone, I'm out, it's all over,
There is no time to recover.

You took my heart, you took my life,
Im going to have to use the knife.

To make the scar that reminds me,
Of who you wanted me to be.

I carve it in, those words I cannot forget,
Im so nervous that I start to sweat.

Somethings missing but I cant tell,
It's too late; I already fell.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    Itâ??itâ??itâ??itâ??itâ??itâ??itâ??itâ??itâ??itâ?? its all other the place, you CANNOT copy and paste into this site or else itâ?? will be there.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fugi Andisfather

    I wanna drop the sham plz....ZEPHY i know who you are, and i dont want you covering up my comments OR trying to help me out...i am sorry if i am rude but i am not one for charity

  • 18 years ago

    by Klumzy

    Ok what are you talking about? Are you on drugs? I was just doing you a favour. I don't know you, or your friend or whatever so what are you talking about.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fugi Andisfather

    Ok zephy lay off my case you know what i know and u know that i know that you know me....lol anywayz....but the one who wrote this poem doesnt know ANYTHING

  • 18 years ago

    by Klumzy

    Hm.. intresting. It is kind of weird that this darkened heart fellow seems to have almost the exact same profile as you and except his little discription says that he tries to win someones heart but he always fails and yours says he scarcely gets you to like him. Perhaps a coincidence? Also it seems like he is writing about you and your not (another coincidence?). Also his comments obviously shows that he knows you (coincidence?). No non of this is a coincidence, it is impossible. So I honestly cannot understand why you insist on wriiting poems about people that broke up with you or whatever when there is a probably a perfectly good person right in front of you. I just dont get it. Perhaps you should think less of yourself this Christmas.

    And no, I am not trying to be mean or rude and sorry if I am. It just frustrates me to know that some people ignore the good ones in front of them.