by Shædow Poet Dec 12, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
(Him.) |
Astonishing and amazing. Capturing the core of a story in a few verses. The excellent choice of words and the thoughts it produced great. Excellent work. |
by HOLLY ARMER
Wow....such a tragic tale. This is quite thought provoking. The imagery is so raw and honest! Your choice of words really brought this to life. Not only could I vividly envision it all, but I could taste the putrid smells. Does that make sense? |
by Ann Stareyes
Kat |
by Darien
Amazing. Your words create detailed images in my head. I can almost capture the emotions and feelings of each. A story in a few verses. Incredible. |
by Bill Turner
Incredibly deep, capturing the raw essence of lives on the street, the damage done and empty promises of what could have been. You have a talent that allows you to grab the reader by the throat, slapping them with the reality that sits outside their window, and slamming them back into their easy chair.......powerful, beautiful and amazing! |