Street love tale

by Shædow Poet   Dec 12, 2005


(Him.)
Cuts on the knees of independencies child,
He’s as thinly coated as a newly groomed poodle
Inured to the ecstasy winds and cocaine rain drops
Battling harsher demons in sleepless dreaming.
(A dreaming we call) reality is his own nightmare
In which he is to awake, assiduous that he will
He has been, for 5 arduous years of drunken depression.

(Her.)
Another month, approaching a year of solitude
Candy hookers befriend her with raunchy whips
That reeled her into an abusive world
A dime a day to care for the rotting baby in the sewer.
Her perfume is not a scent many find charming
A mixture of the man’s breathe and the baby’s death
(Her reality is quite) unlike what she calls a dream.

(Them.)
His first big find of money makes him hungry
Her job of selling a body leaves her desperate
Two halves of a heart shape drug piece together
Into a frenzy of ferocity and calming of care.
A love story an author fears to ever speak aloud
For its ending is as follows, quite lovely:
They walk in opposing directions,
Falling one step at a time,
She cradles the dead baby, he nurses the permanent cuts
They never once blink in absolute wonder
Of what a love tale it could have been.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Astonishing and amazing. Capturing the core of a story in a few verses. The excellent choice of words and the thoughts it produced great. Excellent work.
    ~The Unforgiven

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow....such a tragic tale. This is quite thought provoking. The imagery is so raw and honest! Your choice of words really brought this to life. Not only could I vividly envision it all, but I could taste the putrid smells. Does that make sense?
    Well done~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Kat
    A very deep and powerful write....Truly a great job with this one....Absolutely AWESOME!

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Amazing. Your words create detailed images in my head. I can almost capture the emotions and feelings of each. A story in a few verses. Incredible.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Incredibly deep, capturing the raw essence of lives on the street, the damage done and empty promises of what could have been. You have a talent that allows you to grab the reader by the throat, slapping them with the reality that sits outside their window, and slamming them back into their easy chair.......powerful, beautiful and amazing!