Incredibly deep, capturing the raw essence of lives on the street, the damage done and empty promises of what could have been. You have a talent that allows you to grab the reader by the throat, slapping them with the reality that sits outside their window, and slamming them back into their easy chair.......powerful, beautiful and amazing!

Amazing. Your words create detailed images in my head. I can almost capture the emotions and feelings of each. A story in a few verses. Incredible.

Kat
A very deep and powerful write....Truly a great job with this one....Absolutely AWESOME!

Love Ann

Wow....such a tragic tale. This is quite thought provoking. The imagery is so raw and honest! Your choice of words really brought this to life. Not only could I vividly envision it all, but I could taste the putrid smells. Does that make sense?
Well done~Holly

Astonishing and amazing. Capturing the core of a story in a few verses. The excellent choice of words and the thoughts it produced great. Excellent work.
~The Unforgiven