I feel the exact same way! I hide my feelings too. Nobody really knows the real me, just my BFFL. I loved it.

Wow this is amazing. i went thru kinda the same thing not to long ago. its really no fun. sucha sad but excellent written poem! keep it up. read sum of my work if ya get the time.
luv ya!

Yeah, i can relate. exellent poem. 5/5

That was very good..I too relate to that..Nice poem yet sad and i like it..good job 5/5

Super job. Great work expressing yourself.

This poem is very well written..u did an awesome job....i also wanted to thank you for ur help..im not very good with the face to face tlkin shit so i wrote her a letter..that will still work right?

Hey, trust me when I say, I know how you feel, and there are people who feel the same way, and more who feel even worst. Just remember there are people out there, with far worst problems. Sometimes we need to count our blessings. However, it is really hard to cope with problems. Although you may fake a smile, it sometimes help comfort you. Like I said, if you need someone to talk to, I am here.

PS. Great poems you have here. Thanks for the read, I enjoyed them.

This was an amazing poem, and i totally know how you feel. i feel like this all the time...i have one comment that will help your readers understand ur rhythem better...it'll make the flow easier..

In poetry, there are things called pauses, or breaks. Most of the time, they're natural, when you read something, you pause. But most of the time, they happen when someone starts a new line, or they put punctuation at the end of a line.

I think that if you start a new line, when you put in a punctuation mark, it'll help the reader understand where your pauses are...like this!

Look at my past, It's kind of scary
Look if you dare

that would be like this

Look at my past,
It's kind of scary
Look if you dare

Anoter very well written poem. I ask you to find bob shanks though, and read his poem "You don't understand" because think it will open your eyes a tad.

Aww it's really sad! And I really can relate to it! Very good job!

With all respect it is a bit rocky, but it has potential and it's already pretty good...Keep it up.

xDarkSuicidex

Only problem I have is Lossed should be lost ( trust me, it will still rhyme with tossed lol)
Other than that thoruoughly ejoyed it.