Comments : Lost in Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Marketer, my strength is what gets me to work at seven am and keeps me going through the day, when all else has failed me. The only people who know I am depressed are the ones who read my poetry. I can shine it on and play the game with the best of them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Bill,
    Me crys...why do you feel so sad, why don't you share your feelings...this poem's really sad and depressing. Come on...you're a strong person, but you're also a human. Feeling sad's sometimes good, but all those feelings you must share with a friend.You know I'm always here for you...anytime you wish to talk.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Bill
    I hide things in my life that truly bother me because I don't want no one to worry. But you know I've learnt now to try to talk about it with others, it does help... but at least you're able to let it out through you writing about it and I do the same....It helps and I hope one day soon your pain will cease and your life once again will shine....

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by waiting4U2Bmine

    I know what you mean...Those words expressed the tourment of a pain Most I hope will never experience... job well done William:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Clouds n ur Is

    Great poem, I really liked it, Check out some of my stuff and tell me what you think.

    *Clouds n ur Is.*

  • 18 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    Hey Bill really great poem your words are cool, but who ever made you so sad they shouldnt be in your life dont let them hurt you. Take care and look at some of my poems and tell me what you think. XoX NaT XoX

  • 18 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    What can I say!? It's awesome! I love your poems! Keep it up!
    ~SMILES~