This was a great poem overall! I loved the words you used. Thanks for sharing this with me! :D

Very touching. I have the same kind of relationship with my father so I can really relate. The only thing I would work on for this, is you are kind of repetative in parts. I don't mean to critisize, because I really do like the poem, just wanted to help you if you want.

Nice job

This is so beautiful Juls . The more I read of you're poems, the more better they become . You never cease to amaze me . Keep up the good work .

Love Ya

Letty

Great poem!! keep writing and i will keep reading.
Love Always Tiffany Heather

A wonderful job. amazing. keep it up. keep on writing.

So true, sometimes we all get mad at our parents but at the end of the day we wont live without them! 5/5

I know how u feel and everything u wrote is true.....i loved it