There is certainly "hope" & never think of giving up fight.... great poem once again / just keep it up

0hh a t0uching piece. very heartfelt t0uching lines. g0od j0b darl. very well written

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it shows such deep emotions, i can feel through each word! well done
luv em

Aw woww, this is so sad, and yet i can relate, aw the last verse is so true about my life tooh hun, stay strong we can make it through this together, keep on writing though i love your work, take care

Awww hunni this poem is sooo good! i rele like it. very creative idea. 110%! even tho i can't look into your eyes i'm sure that some day soon there will be tons of happiness in them. trust me. lyl~lex

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5/5

Hun hope your okay (BIG HUG) well great poem i loved it 5/5

You are getting better and better each day, you are a great poet and a great friend, this poem is cool as, I love it.

Oh.. that's sad.

Be happy Anna! Write many many more Butterfly Pony Rainbow Poems! You're too awesome to be so sad!

Well, this poem was fantastic. I'm really lost for words when it comes to your poems... how do you comment on perfect. They are flawless...

Well, you rock.

Matt >:B

WoW that was really great you have great talent. i feel ur sadness dont worry everything will be ok MWA .check some of my poems out.XoX Nat XoX

Great poem! Your words flowed perfectfectly I can relate My favourite part was the second last words strong words... keep it up=)!

Once again, my friend, beautifully done. it speaks so much and really puts out alot of emotion. and again i'll say, loved it!
.:Samara:.

I see hope, and light, and i see an awesome friend, and gorgeous girl. :)
love ya hun...
miss u... haven't heard from you in a while! :'(
xoxoxo

Hope, yet there is hope. Hope enough for anything, for everything for your future children or husband, or people in your life you will meet one day, for the talents that you never knew you had, the ones that you still could show the world. I don't know how to give it to you, how to make you believe in life again. I don't know. If I can help you baby please tell me, anything that could help no matter how big or small or stupid. I've been there far too many times, wish someone who understood me was with me too, so yeah, just an offer.

-Tainted Mikochan

"Look deep into my eyes,
Honestly tell me do you see light?
Is there any hope,
Or can I finally give up this fight?"

Yes, if I could physically look into your eyes, I could honestly tell you the honest person and true friend that I see looking out of them. I could see an expressive beautiful person behind the pain, there is talent and ablility and I could tell you all I saw about how great you are, the question is, could you, would you see it?

-Tainted Mikochan

I wrote a poem to respond to this one, so check it out sometime. Love ya baby!

-Tainted Mikochan

If I was to look into your eyes I think I would see eyes that look very much like mine, lost and confused, sad and broken, but you can't give up the fight, because then what ever is hurting you has won

I will tell you what I see.
I see an amazing poem,
An amazing poet.
And someone with amazing potential.
Keep up the good work.

Great poem. i know how you feel. keep it up!

Do you see the utter emptiness?
Where living is a chore,
And lost is my happiness.

My favourite bit, that was so sad! Sorry it took me a while to comment, I was in Rome for a week with my family. Sorry, back to the poem. It was so sad and so deep, and I so know what you mean by the verse above, but there is light at the end of the tunnel, somewhere, even if it might be a long way away, you can make it!
Thanks for the comment on my poem by the way!
Luv Helen xxx