Wow... hun... this poem is one of the best I've read because it's so creative and original. i LOVE the way you wrote this... shows all the confusion that someone can have when they're still missing a past love. Great writing hun, keep up the fantastic work!

Omg.. incredible.. written like a true poet.. dont stop writing.. perfect!

Wow! this is amazing! i love it!

thankssomuch for commenting and rating my poem! i appreciate it so much!

5/5!

Unique...very good. tay