Childhood Crush

by Diego Alvarado   Dec 12, 2005


Love came around and brought her to me.
Could it have been destiny to bring a girl as lovely as she?
It all happened in a blink of an eye but to my surprise an angel appeared amidst a darkened sky.
But who could this startling beauty be?
none other than the childhood crush returning from what seemed as an eternity.

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  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Wow... beautiful... lol childhood crushes... nobody ever forgets them... ;D 5/5 and thanks for commenting on one of my poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Great poem i love the vibe it gives off i read it twice great one

  • 18 years ago

    by Chit Cyn

    This is a nice write and the emotion it invoked poured unto one's mind as easily, rhymes are fine. I would say you are a promising writer. There are only few grammaticar errors, mispelt words like "a mist" must be amidst, and "then" must be than. Keep writing, dont rush things. U do it well, u can do it more well.

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