Great, 5/5, keep writing!

Hey wow this peom is soo tru! i agree wif it whole heartedly! good work i like it alot. kinda how me n my bf are like.
"Love is giving him the ability to destroy you,
And trusting him that it isn't something he will do."
is def my fav lines
talk soon

Thank you SO much for your comment on my poem "Here Comes The Rain" i wasnt quite sure of what to put nistead of plop because i didnt want to use a word twice.. it seems to get on my nerves a lot when i do that i try to look for words and not use one twice but, i cant always do that.. anyways, as i said thank you for your comment and by the way i loved your poem it was very well planned out rhythmically and i saw to it like it wa being explained 5/5
much love
-Rachel

Great poem
you really did a good job
you got the talent in writing
keep up the good work
and thanks for commenting on my poem
it really means alot to me

This is a great poem and I can really relate to it.. Wonderful job hun..