Comments : Black hole of a heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Wonderful poem! I always wanted to use the word "enigma" in a poem, it's a powerful word due it's lack of use in everyday conversations. Lately I've become obsessed with eyes, so the opening stanza touched me. And don't worry about the ratin of this poem, I rated it 5 but some other lame brains are just trying to get to you. To them I say Kiss Off!

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    *hugs* go for it, wolfy :) im rooting 4 u. don't let the boundaries of love get in the way. i'm sure if you showed him one of these poems when he's in a "deep" moment then it's sure to happen :) love poems are one of the best ways to get someone to love you. remember Layla, the world loves you.

    Also, I found out what your name meant a few days ago. It means "dark beauty".. That is a cool name!!! :] of course you probably know that, but hey... to let you know, my full name (first and last) is Kristi Victoria and it means Christ Victory :) I'm named after Jesus because I almost died at birth and my mom prayed and promised me to God if he'd let me live :)