by ToxicSpookyAngel Dec 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
When I think of you |
by NannO
This is gud.. but i think u dont have enough stops and im jumbled up about it.. lyk i feel like im reading a reli big sentence, so maybe u cud space it into meaningful stanzas..u cud do that 2 ur other poems, too.. i lykd ur words.. came from ur heart.. i noe u cud do better :D |
by taylor
Would it be ok if i asked you who is joey!!wow your poems make me think never stop writing!! |
Hi, your poem completely broke my heart. I'm sorry for your loss. I feel the pain in this poem. I think it was great and I wish you the best :) |