Hi, your poem completely broke my heart. I'm sorry for your loss. I feel the pain in this poem. I think it was great and I wish you the best :)

Would it be ok if i asked you who is joey!!wow your poems make me think never stop writing!!

This is gud.. but i think u dont have enough stops and im jumbled up about it.. lyk i feel like im reading a reli big sentence, so maybe u cud space it into meaningful stanzas..u cud do that 2 ur other poems, too.. i lykd ur words.. came from ur heart.. i noe u cud do better :D
thnx 4 commenting on my poem
take care
Nouna