Incredible is the only word I can use to describe it.

Hey gurl this is hot. a little confusing like i didnt get the whole thing but your words gave u a sense of evil thoughts and violation against the "lover". if that makes sense. tell me if it dont. catchup wif ya babe. luv ya heaps

Before I comment on this work of art, let me assure you that I read it completely through . I found no errors or mistakes . Can it be that those people who commented on you're poetry were telling the truth ? I'm not an experienced judge or anything . But I think this particular poem is a masterpiece . Its unique, well worded, and leaves the reader in aw . So take my comment and my critisism well, because I'm always truthful when I give it out . I truly enjoyed reading this poem and if I can in due time, if you have enough patience . I will read, rate, and comment on them all .

You're new found friend
Letty

P.S. Keep writting and I'll keep reading .

Wonderful poe. i found nothing that could be improved, no flaws at all. brilliant poem

Interesting use of words...however i liked it....keep up the god work..5/5

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Outstanding work, this poem is exceptional.

Hey congratulations for this awesome poem! It made me speechless!