Don't Give Up On "Us"...

by ShhhhItsASecret©   Dec 12, 2005


How many times must I tell you
That I love you more than anything
You mean so much to me
You are my world, my everything

I don't care about the quarrels
Or the hurtful things we've said
It's not about our little fights,
But the love in our hearts, instead

I know that we can make this work
Because we've already held on this long
We have been through a lot during our relationship
But I know we can handle more, we're strong

Just don't give up on me
Especially now, when I need you most
Let's get past this fight, right now
And stay together and remain close

Every time we fight, it hurts me so much
Because I'm so afraid of losing you
You are the man of my dreams
Without you I don't know what I'd do...

© 2005 Brandy Dorr

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  • 18 years ago

    by dineshia

    I definitely LOVE this poem from beginning to end. This is exactly how i feel about my boyfriend/baby daddy. We've been through alot and I know we can get through anything together but it feels like he's giving up and slipping away. I understand what this poem is about.

  • 18 years ago

    by kkly

    Hope is so hard to find...
    Trusted sm1 is harder to beleive...
    Just beleive in wut u want n within him,
    and he will never let u down....

    Well another true poem...7/5..
    take care
    alex

  • 19 years ago

    by TheDevilHimself

    Really gud 2. i really loved it. ur gud bj. love ya. kisses and hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by kevin

    Wow i really love it i feel the same way with my g/f i really can relate to it keep it up its really good

    kevin

  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    BJ, that was a brilliant poem! I loved the emotion it displayed. It was wonderfully written and expressed.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

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