This is really well written, its very, um... deep i think that may b the word i am looking 4. nice job! u r a very good writer

Wow... this is really well written! it flowed beautifuly and was simply amazing! so creative! keep it up! i'll read the rest!

sammie

I can feel my heart beats faster and faster while reading this poem. This is an incredible write, I feel like I was the one walking down these stairs. You bring me in to your poem and make me feel through it. Thanks for giving me such an amazing ride. =)