This was a very emotional poem and i liked it a lot... the only thing is your stanzas didnt all have the same rhythm and it seemed a little lopsided... but thats only an opinion... your ryhming was decent as well... very nice job and keep it up!

sammie

That was a great poem. i couldn't explain my love for my ex any better, but that is exactily what happened to my relationship. anyway keep up the good work.
koral

It's great how you wrote your poem in the form of a story. Absolutely fabulous how you put the words together =) 5/5. Check out my poems if u like.