Wow, thats an incredible poem, such powerful language and descriptions. amazing writing. 5/5
take care,
xxEmmaxx

Sweet job man...really good poem, i like the way put it all together and the rhyming style...good job!

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I think this is my favorite poem of yours...great job...and thanks for the comment (it was like a weird love poem i guess)...anway great job and keep it up

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