by Fig Dec 12, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
(Read the first four lines of each stanza in a long stream like thing. They are meant to flow on, and the last two lines of each stanza rhymes with the one before (in sets of twos), but I'm sure your all intelligent enough to notice that, oh and its about dreams and how their never happy) |
How do you do it? Damit you're too amazing lucy!!! I don't think I can say anything about it except I'm still in awe. Keep writing them though girl, we haven't enough... |
Whoa! That was intense, great poem. Very dark and powerful. Rolls of the tongue nicely hah. You've got skills |
Oooh *shivers* i love it! I hope not all your dreams are like this though my little Turnip :( |
by mier
This is freaking awesome!!! u SO deserve more than 5!! i think this is my favourite poem among all ur other poems... Great job!!!! |
Oh my goodness Lu! This poem reminded me of that dream you had about the giant puppet!!!!! ARGH!!! Do you remember that??? |