by ratchild666 Dec 12, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Her dress is ripped her wings are torn |
by Elynnka
You have managed to paint the picture of this fallen angel very well with your lovely descriptions and imagery. |
by StormShadow
Really good poem with a nice rythmn, superbly written! |
by VampyraKiâ€
Wow that was amazing you captured my attentiona and kept it until the end |
by Dreams
Amazing descriptions you have there. A sad tale of a fallen angel. I would really like it to be longer, it's so sad that I was hoping for a different ending. Nonetheless, a truly emotional piece. Despair speaks so strongly through the words. |
by Ashelin
Dark, and sad. This is one of the better fallen angel poems I have read |