I rated it a 4 because it is more of a story than a poem. And it is a little messy to read. Maybe if you put spaces between the stanzas you can get more attention to it.

Wow!! i am actually speechless! that was such an amazing poem, the writing was stunning! 5/5, and keep on writing, ur an excellent poet. thanku so much for ur comment, it means a lot,
luv xxEmmaxx

WOW! it was exellent. i loved it. Thanks for reading and commenting my poem. =p

I put a 5 i think it's really GOOD...keep up de good WoRK

Whoa...really deep.

GReat! you write how i feel its like reading my life..lol...great job

Your poem was great! I only knew to look you up b/c you left a comment on my best friend's poem (she)! Thanks! You have graced me with a GREAT poem! Love always, Poetvoices

I realy love this peom i can relate to this realy good srry this is not long i am not good at this kinda stuff but this peom is realy good

I realy love this peom i can relate to this realy good srry this is not long i am not good at this kinda stuff but this peom is realy good

Fantastic poem, full of emotions. really fab!!! thanks for the comment!

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Thanks again for your comments, yes all of my poems are inspired by life experiences, whether they be mine or someone close to me!
i really love your poems and i don't think i can express that enough! you have a wonderful talent! never stop writing!.......luv em