by nobody truly knows me Dec 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
*please vote and leave comments. this one is special to me* |
by BlueJay
This, this piece is amazing! I love the imagery and the simplicity of your words (yet they seem so.powerful) Your emotion is definately felt by the audience and that is a great.skill. Marvelous job, I love this. The subtle rhymes were a fantastic touch. |
Superior Performance I can really relate to this one |
by Brandy
Words can't express how beautiful this poem is...5/5 |
by Naima
This is amazing! I love when the beginning part depicts you on the floor. Great peom! |
I liked this poem it feels so true . thankx for the comment u left me :) |