Beautiful poem, i loved it, brilliantly written 5/5!
take care,
xxEmmaxx

That was very good..Very well written too
5/5 and keep up the good work

Awe... i loved this! it was so sad but at the same time...well i dont know who to explain it but i loved it! you are a very talented girl! keep it up!

sammie

This is an awsome poem! I like how much emotion you put in this. 5/5!

This is an awsome poem! I like how much emotion you put in this. 5/5!

Wow now this is a very good poem, it made me wanan cry because like i dunno its just so good and reminds me fo my friend, this poem is amazing keep up the good work

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Awwwww That was so well written and it was so good! You must feel lucky to have a quardian angel =D

5/5

Oustanding metaphors

I agree with Michael, very well written, beautiful poem. 5/5

-*-Cherri-*-

Hey, great poem very well writtin and lots of emotion ...thanks for reading...keep up ur writing!!!

I liked this and even though practicaly none of it actualoly rhymes it's just good, the rhymes are close but they really never except for once or twice actually rhyme but this was good i loved the idea behind it and you can tell that it means something 5/5

Very nice!The rhyhme breaks in a few parts, but what you write is interesting and vivid:)The beginning sounds cool,great job

I gave it a 5. I really liked this poem and i could relate to it. I loved your word choice and its flow was nice as well. If you have the chance check out my poems and tell me what you think. Again great job keep on writing...you have talent.

5/5 loved it great job

tabby

That is so sweet. I like the whole guardian angel theme. Excellent.

Its beautifully painful! You captured your thoughts well! It flowes gracefully along the page! Your writing style is a lot like mine :)

Wow leaves me speachless!!! and i love angels :D

I liked this poem it feels so true . thankx for the comment u left me :)

This is amazing! I love when the beginning part depicts you on the floor. Great peom!

Words can't express how beautiful this poem is...5/5