Comments : The sad water

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, how did you learn to write as good as this? that was very uniqe.
    you described everything wonderfully.
    much love and happiness,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Very very deep! As deep as the sea perhaps?!! Very well written, great descriptive ideas - the flow was also excellent.

    Peace. [Sole]