Do you??

by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist   Dec 12, 2005


Do you enjoy the sound of my shattering heart?
the sound of my whole world falling apart...

Do you love the splashing of my tears?
watching me feel the pain I've felt for years

Do you like the bang of this gun
you find breaking my heart oh so fun..

do you love my soul when it screams
you enjoy haunting me inside my never accomplished dreams

Do you crave me to feel like this
you must like the touch of my razor blade kiss

Do you like the sting of a bullet though my head
you enjoy the sense of me being dead

Do you like the shaking of this bottle of pills
am i really a person you want to kill

do you like the choking of my hanging from this rope
do you love me losing all my hope

do you like the confusion i get from you
do i hate you, do i love you?

do your eyes pleasure killing me inside
holding me back so i have to hide

you like the fear in my eyes
when i always need you, and always try

Do you like when i can't accomplish my dreams
the anger i get when i hold in these screams

do you like when i look inside your eyes and start to cry
the thoughts in my head when i want to collapse and die

why do you do the most horrible things
i did nothing to you, why do you do this to me?

-please vote and comment

i kinda like this one.-

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  • 18 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    I love it just like i love you

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    I like it too! its sooo good. your such a talented writer! your words flow perfectly together. keep you chin up sweetie. hopefully everything will get better. i'm here for you if you ever need anything. lyl~lex
    P.S.--i've added you to my favorties.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Spirit of Ash

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    Wow I really loved this poem ! 5/5

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