Lord You Have Blessed Me

Good poem just the first line i think is meant to read AN angel. then i have a small suggestion for one of your verses,
*You gave me someone that is
beautiful in the inside and out
I dont know what i would do
without you lord
I would be nothing with out you lord*

I think the 2nd line should just read, *Beautiful inside and out*

And then don't repeat without you lord, maybe leave out the 1st without you lord.
Anyways thats just my opinion.....Lovely poem though i wish i had someone to say that to lol.
Thanks for the comment by the way.
Mwah

LOL angle!!!

AWW THIS IS SO CUTE, You have talent girl keep this amazing work but however i would like to add, um whats an angle? :P Did you mean Angel...cause im pretty sure god doesent send angles...Hehe anyways sorreh this was an awesome poem loved the 2nd verse aw

Ohh this is such a beautiful poem hun! =) I love this one!

Wow jayma i loved it!!!!!!!!