Comments : Lord You Have Blessed Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Delanea

    Wow jayma i loved it!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Ohh this is such a beautiful poem hun! =) I love this one!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    AWW THIS IS SO CUTE, You have talent girl keep this amazing work but however i would like to add, um whats an angle? :P Did you mean Angel...cause im pretty sure god doesent send angles...Hehe anyways sorreh this was an awesome poem loved the 2nd verse aw

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    LOL angle!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Good poem just the first line i think is meant to read AN angel. then i have a small suggestion for one of your verses,
    *You gave me someone that is
    beautiful in the inside and out
    I dont know what i would do
    without you lord
    I would be nothing with out you lord*

    I think the 2nd line should just read, *Beautiful inside and out*

    And then don't repeat without you lord, maybe leave out the 1st without you lord.
    Anyways thats just my opinion.....Lovely poem though i wish i had someone to say that to lol.
    Thanks for the comment by the way.
    Mwah