I love it. Sounds like a hard life. Stay strong. Things will turn out alright. They always do. I'm here if you ever wanna talk. xoxo Mary

I see alot of me in your pomes i know how you are feeling about your dad!!

The poems about your dad are good all of your poems are good and i can really relate to them all. i hate my dad but sometimes i miss him so much because he isnt here. i know how you feel so if you ever need to talk just email me or something.

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Thats really nice spitfire....
i have problems with my parents sometimes aswell... fel the same way too.- well at times. keep on writing all of them sound beautiful. Can see you've got loads of inspiration!

I love this poem.it is very good.but sounds like you are living a sad life.