Hey I saw that you only got 3 points from the last person that voted.. I'm not sure why, but I think you deserve at the Very Very least a 4, (and I gave you a 5/5). I'm thinking maybe it was the third verse in which you forgot to seperate your two lines, so it's stuck there awkwardly like one big line... But no problem there right? hehe, see you 'round the site. keep up the good work! :)