Stuck By Ls

by John Fleece   Dec 13, 2005


Chours: In the pain
In the fall
(nothing at all)
In the rain
In the risk
(nothing at all)
I'm stuck in it all
And what did I gain?
nothing at all
X2
C
Frozen here in the past
Thinking you and I will always last
What am I Saying? You never care
So you gave me pain that I have to bear
C
Time is the enemy
I cannot think
I do not know
If the past is real
Why should she know
It hurts me so to let you go

C
My feeling for you are so lame
I took the risk,took the fall,
What did I gain?
nothing at all
Now I' stuck in the past
Now the good time never last
Now I'm stuck
In the pain, in the rain
In it all
Now I'm stuck in the past
And it's all your fault
That the good things never last
Why did I take the risk
That takes the fall
Just to gain
Nothing at all

C

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ana

    One day you'll sing me this song. And hopefully it'll all just be a faded memory.

    Oh, and one more thing. Not to sound like a nag or anything, but this is a critique space as well. In the Chorus, the last line. Shouldn't bear be spelt B-A-R-E? Or am I getting its context mixed up?

    Other than that, I can feel the pain reverberating off of this song. Maybe it is how the action is perceived and not how it's intended, but I don't think "You never care". The person cares about you of course. You just feel crushed and hurt and you can't remember the good times long enough to really see them before the pain consumes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Hey,
    This is a great song/poem w/e lol!! Full of emotion and thats what makes it soo good!!
    ~~Sweetie

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