This is really good, i can totally relate to it

=( I can relate to this entirely... I hope that you're alright hunni! This is an amazing poem, though. Great job!

Hey, excellent poem! 5/5! thanku for the comment, it means a lot to me,
take care,
luv xxEmmaxx

Aw another one i can relate to, well done once again my dear you are amazing, keep on writing, take care, xxoo

Amazing as always...

Nice work huni..
this boy seems to be putting u through a lot of pain!! it's NOT good!!
xoxo

Great poem...the message is so true...5/5!
-HUGS N KISSES!

Great poem i loved it so much!!!!!!!!!!

You say it like it is. And like it is, is that your hurting. I'm going through similar myself. They say time heals, but time just drags. Stay strong. Nice poem.

Oh hun that was absolutely beautiful..well written and well expressed
keep it up :)

Loved it..it was really great....well done xx

That was great !!! hope to read more you're awesome and just full of suprises dont forget that !!! and if you're going through alot of pain you're doing a good job of letting it out in poems cause keeping it inside will just hurt you more
love,
Carly

0h sweetie. t0uching 0nce again.... =(

Oh hunny. I feel for you and your pain. I can't say I am you and feel exactly as you do, but my boyfriend just did the same thing that you talked about in your poem, and so I can relate to being hurt so baddly, and not understanding what you did wrote when you were sure the love would last forever. I send you huggles. I have some poems about this same topic, lol. It is good that you can use poems as an outlet. Goodluck baby! If you need someone, drop me a line.

-Mikochan

Maybe you all will be together again someday...:)

Oh my god. that's such a good poem!!! i love it!! keep da poems comin'. -patti-

Great poem, you have good talent! keep them coming.