This one is good...but am sorry as its not upto the mark..u write really good and u need concentration for that too...as u alreaady mentioned that u were writing in class...may be thats y...its not as u r expected to write.

till next...take care and all the best

Wow... i really liked this poem.. it was so sad but i can honestly tell you i know how you feel... its horrible to feel that way but sometimes the things that you wait for are the best things of all... very good write, im definelty going to read some more of your poems... keep up the good work!

sammie

Your poems are all so sad, and yet they are all so beautifully done at the same time.