by Lu Dec 13, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Something as minor as a simple flu |
by Jacklyn
Great poem, and i hope you feel better since you wrote this. i like how you connected the flu to the hurricane, it's such a powerful storm and many people know of the damage it has given, definately this year. even if people didn't know the effects of the flu on someone's body just relateing it to such a storm will get the point across. creative write. |
by neens
Very good poem. I can't say that I know how you feel...but I watched one of my very close friends go through MS. I know that it is not easy and you explained the flu very well. Stay stronge and I am praying for you. Lots of hugs, |
by Angie
What a very unique way to describe what you are feeling with the flu. Poor Luanne, I do hope you are feeling better soon. I can only imagine what you are going through and you will be in my thoughts and prayers. Feel better. Big hugs and lots of chicken soup coming your way...... |
by Simon Hayes
The flu is a horrible and painful sickness, which we always forget. I found truth and understanding in your poem and have more knowledge regarding the illness that effects the nervous system. I do hope that you get better soon (if not already) and hope that you ill recover to your normal self soon :) |
by Ann Stareyes
Luanne |