I liked your poem alot. I can relate...You know if you really feel like that you can always im me or e-mail me cause I know what hell is like. I wish you would check out my poems and tell me what you think

Great stuff really feel for you ya ever need to talk feel free

5/5 i loved it. i can relate.

Wow i can definately relate to this!! stay strong and things begin to look up... gradually =)
~court

The flow in the beginning was a little iffy but it got better i really liked it. :)

Great poem. When I use that rhyme scheme I tend to use longer lines than you have, but this poem is great! I can relate to it a lot. Excellent job.

Tiffany.xox.

Can you please comment & rate on my newest? Thank you! =)

A topic I think most people will be able to relate to on some level, which adds to the effect taht this piece has.

Keep writing
Nici

A bet alot of people feel the same way so its very heartfelt. Great work if you want to talk im here for ya

Juls

Great poem.
"Tears fill my eyes
I am living in a disguise"
i can totally relate to that. 5/5.

I Liked it.... For your age, good job.

By the way in the 3rd from last line, "to" Should be "Too.:

Overall, Great job.

Awesome. powerful stuff in it that i can really relate to. u did a good job...keep it up

Well written Morgan! .... you seem to be getting everybodies attention with this peice too!!

All the best
Dave.x

Talent, talent, talent... thats all you have! that and skill, and rythme and meaning! i loved it, great job, I can fully relate!

Locked up in a dark secret place
Only to be opened ,if to be erased

^^ I really liked these lines, for some reason they really stood out to me!

Amazing job!

**meggie**

Talent, talent, talent... thats all you have! that and skill, and rythme and meaning! i loved it, great job, I can fully relate!

Locked up in a dark secret place
Only to be opened ,if to be erased

^^ I really liked these lines, for some reason they really stood out to me!

Amazing job!

**meggie**

I can totally relate...excellent job. i loved it.

Great Write- Easily Related To. Good Language Use Too. The Rhyming Was Very Well Done.

5/5

xoxo

xLauren3

Great Write- Easily Related To. Good Language Use Too. The Rhyming Was Very Well Done.

5/5

xoxo

xLauren3

I like it a lot. It shows great feelings. Theres a few grammatical errors, commas wrongly placed (like "opened ,if"...the common should be before the space) but a good poem as a whole

[PygmyPuff]

Wow, i loved this poem, very emotional & descriptive, graet job, welldone! 5/5

Spoke to my heart like you have no idea....awesome poetry