Hmm I'm not sure about this poem if I'm perfectly honest. For starters the rhyme is very bland and predictable. Most of the ideas are overused ones too. The only thing I can say is it had fairly good flow. Sorry I couldn't be more positive, but I always think it's better to be honest than sugar coat everything.

Very nice. I like the form. I also like the content. I like short poems that hold a lot of emotion. Loretta 5/5

Sad.
very sad.
It's very descriptive and emotional. but for me its not too original.
that probably sounds dumb or mean or something but if its important to you then thats all that matters.
~Emah
4/5

Its fantastic! I like the rhyming and the imagry most of all. Keep up the good work!

Great poem, love it, the only posible thing I would change is mixing up some of the words, in between lines, But I love it DEFFINATAELY a 5/5 poem,
Great poetic piece, keep it up