I loved it it was great you are a great writer keep up the good work!!!!!

This is great! keep writing!

Oh my god this poem is amazing and i can feel the emotion behind it...i love all of ur work and i know that u know that...well 5/5 keep up the great work....5/5

Wow this is so good! i like it a lot...its very sad. it makes you think bout the terrible things that can happen becasue of one mistake. great as usual!

Omg had me in tears!:( reminds me of those TAC ads..
Great poem hun, u have talent thats for sure xoxo

Crazyyyyyyyy poem. I know this girl, that was driving her boyfriend to school on his birthday and she crashed and he died. She blames herself all the time...but he died for not wearing his seatbelt. Life can be so cruel.

::MELI::

I am impressed, you defintly have some great talent and this poem sent a very strong message! Well done =)

An example of the harmful effects of drunk driving.
A poem with a lesson?
Who can complain?

Amazing!! I wanted to cry! You write soo well...is this a true story? I hope not! Keep it up!

0mg what a t0uching pice. w0w that was very well written!!!!! 0mg.. g0od j0b 0n it darl!! very well written!!
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

OH MY GOD.This poem is like....you read it and don't expect that at the end. It's so sad. But I know alot of people that've been in these situations. Love it. I gave it a *5*.

WoW.. that was an excellent poem i so didnt expect that that it was really really good!!!!... anyway you have a talent thats for sure.. check some of my poems out.XoX Nat XoX

Your poem was WONDERFUL!!keep up the good work!!5!!

Wow, that was a winderful poem. 5'5

Such a sad piece .... but over the holidays it will hopefully carry a strong message to many ...

Great write , packs a powerful punch ....

Omg!! this poem was amazing. Great job 5/5

Wow! That was a really great poem. I am glad you wrote that. That happened to my friend not to long ago. And is a very serious thing. Keep up the good work, and keep writing poems.
~casey~

Wow! This was sucha good poem! I really liked it...great flow. keep it up.

Omg...that was so sad. My mouth just dropped when I read the last line. I actually got butterflies. I have no idea why. That was a really good poem and I loved the way you wrote it. Awesome job! 5/5

TAKE CARE-
stargazer38

Your really good to keep the rhyming going, and i think it was a good story..and yet also a great poem.
loved it

-x3hannah