Another great one, I thought it was gonna be like the one w/sprite at first but it wasn't! Great job!! Keep writing!! 5/5

Wow.. you're a really good writer. this was a really sad but good poem. keep it up. you have some real talent.

I liked it

Superb writing! Wondefully done... Very gut wrenching, heart stoppingly sad!

Touching and so sad.....You're truly talented....a very good message within.

Love Ann

NiCe PoemM!! LOvEDd ITT =)

0Oo0 Nd thXSs For Da CommenTT

Omg your poems are so sad!

Awwww you done it again:) anova twist lol poor guy died cos his stupid girl freind try drive drunk...tuttut tut good message

I am deeply in awe of you talent, this poem was perfectly stuctured and with such a deep message behind it. I can only hope that those who read this take from it the true tragedy of loss.
Excellent poem, and I mean that from the heart. It is rarely that I read a poem so well writen and thought provoking as this.
*VioletRaven*

Oh my word, such a touching poem. Brilliant, absoloutely amazing!!!
extremely well written, last verse is so powerful.
xx xx xx

Great stuff.
keep it up!!

This was like a beautiful, sad story. may be you should take your talent and explore story writing as well.

good luck
shobhana

AWSOME POEM!!! and thanx 4 tha comment

This is so good but very sad, I would be soooo sad if that happed to me.Keep up the good writting

I don't even know how to start this. This poem is not only one of the best i've ever read, it's probably one of the saddest too. There are no words to describe your genuine talent. I love to read your poetry and am constantly checking on it. No matter what happens, NEVER stop writting. It would be a sin to keep your talent hidden. Thanks for the comment on my poem, you have no idea honered I feel to have someone which such amazing ability write comments on my poetry. I'll be waiting for more poems by you! :)

Your endinf caught me by surprise.

I assumed it would be her parents, and having her boyfriend dead was the bes choice.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I really liked this. I've read some of your other work too. I liked all of it. You are very talented.. Now I have one question.. Is this true? I can feel so much emotion behind these words. It's amazing to me how you can take feelings that are so ugly and make them into something that is absolutely beautiful!
~Shelby Lynn~
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OMG! I just realized I wrote like the same poem, but it was more based on love! Wow! I just wrote mine like a week or two ago! You should read it. It's called, "I Still Love You." I loved this! 5/5. I love ALL your work!

Wow.. omg, i didn't expect it to be her boyfriend.. wow..you're good!! loved it.. wow i'm still shocked a little, it was sad.. you can feel the emotions.. good job, wow.. sorry loving your poems by the way you're a skilled writer.. thats was good, unexpected. ok take care
~leilani~

This is so sad but so well written! I loved it and you've definatly taken a spot on my faverots list! Keep the good poems coming!