This is one of the best poems i have ever read! You really get the dramatic feelings across!!! Great job! Keep writing!

It is so sad but at the same time amazing

Omg thats SO sad i got gose bumps form that

Omg this is so ironic i really like it good job love it

Omg! way to shed a tear! gawshhh i really really like that poem you soo have my 5!

OMG!!!!! thats so sad it makes me want to cry!!!!!!

Great Job!!! Gave me chills 5/5

Wow... That was such an amazing poem. The moral behind it was also amazing. You have an amazing talent. 5/5. Keep writing, you are so talented! :)

~BJ~

Oh gosh...when I read the last line I just sat here in shock, holding my breath. Lol. This was so sad...but sooo awesome!! Welcome to my Favorites List!! =D 5/5

TAKE CARE-stargazer38

Omg! the ending was so unexpected. the poem had a great flow.
you've got skills
i love all of ur poems keep up the good work

Wow, that was really sad. but it was an EXCELLENT POEM!! keep up the good work ♥

Omg that is so sad it brought tears to my eyes keep up the great work :):):)

Wow, that's was really deep... JUST THE WAY I LIKE IT! you commented one of my poems b4, but on my other account. 4got the password for it though. but still, gr8 poem. i could really see the cars crashing and all the moments i could visualize within.

gr8 work, Himeko Takahashi

Wow this was great if you can do ths good then you should keep writing i loved it two thumbs up very very good i can say this is one of the best poes i have read and i've read alot

STRONG POEM! The end was too sad to handle!

Nice work. i loved this poem, it kinda got to me on a personal level. my friend and her mom were driving around midnight and a drunk driver came from another corner of the intersection and my friend and her mom died but the drunk driver didnt, ever since i've been against drunk driving. it killed me to see her at her funeral. i miss her soo much. you really worked really hard and it shows and i supost this poem its touching and relistic.

shawna

God, after so much feedback mine hardly seems necessary, Excellent work, you are clearly one of the best

So very sad =/

I love this!!! it is flippin awesome !!! keep up the good work

That is a sad poem but u got the point across my boyfriend lost his bet friend to a druck driver too and it hurts for even me to think about it but u did a great job on the poem