Welcome To My Favourites! great write

I love you poem

Wow that was really good. i had no idea that it was guna be her boyfriend who died, until right at the end. it brought tears to my eyes straight away. that was awesome. keep up the excellent work.

Oh my gosh thats soooooo sad!!!!!!!!!!

You touched my heart... The poem was really sad...

That's so depressing! It almost made me cry. But it's really good. So yeah. Good jub.

Wow.... I loved it!!!! This is a GREAT poem.

So sad, i hope this isnt about anyone you know.... but it's a really good poem

Thats so heart-breaking

Well, I can see why this was voted so very highly. It's brilliant. You've just restored my faith in that there are some well written poems on this site, so thanks. For once, there was actually a good story inside, accompanied by a great flow and clever rhymes. Not that you need my congratulations, but congratulations, lol.

Brad

P.S. I obviously marked this a 5/5.

Amazing poem, really good, i love the style you used and how you wrote it like a story but actually as a poem, and thats hard to do. Great work. 5/5

Nice job!!!!!! this is a good piece of writting too bad it had to be about death!!!!! but it was really good!!!! wow i wish i could come up wit such words and the rhyming wow it had me shocked!!! i take a long time thinnking for word that rhyme!!!! keep up the good work!!! i look up to you!!!! im very impressed i gotta admit!!!!

Wow this is nice writting and great poem. its very sad and heartbreaking. i like the way you put it as a story. 5/5

Please tell me that this isn't true???? This was amazing...nicely wrote...just absolutely amazing!!!!

Wow this is the best write ive read on this site yet.wish i had you r talent well done x

The endingleft me with my speechless....I loved the poem.

Wow i really like it. It was a great twist. keep up the good work 5/5

xoxoxo
jess

Too bad for the story..but nice nice you do have a talent..5/5 for it

Nice rhmyes man its saddening

I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.