by Jasmine
OMG I LOVE THAT YOUR POEM IT REALLY GOOD!!! |
by Katelyn
I luved the flow of the words and u've really got talent so keep using it. this was such a powerful poem, shook me up a little. great job! |
by stephanie
Oh that is so sad but i really love it! |
by Kenny
Nice poem! Love It!! |
by NearlyCrazy6
Aww soo sad! |
I'm so speechless. Absolutly stunning, 5/5 |
by ashley
I love this poem and the story that goes with it....i couldnt believe what happened wen i got to the end...it was realli good |
by maggielou
All i can really say is wow. this is really good. |
by megann anne
Oh my gosh. this was way good. great job. keep it up |
Awwwwwwwwwwww thats so sad ill die if i was the reason of someones death mostly my bf thats the saddest poem i read but i loved it |
by rachel
Good poem! |
by haunted
*CRIES SO HARD IT HURTS MY THROAT*. |
Omg i had teary eye when i read the ending! omg that was sad :( that was great! |
by jessie
This is a very sad story but things like this happen alot and you never think it could happen to you. |
by Bittersweet
Oh my god what a poem...i really really really really like it....one of the best poems i have ever read... |
Wooow....what a sad story......so well written though |
by Toni Ann
That is so sad and horriable. Is it a true story? Or is it made up?? I was just wondering.......its an amazing poem!!! |
by bell
Omg. i love this poem. i added it to my favorite poems. |
by bell
Omg. i loved this poem. i had added it to my ]favs. |
by Blaketooken
Oh my gosh! When I read this my heart hurt. I couldn't even imagine the pain that the girl must have. I felt so sad so fast as I read the last 2 sentences. Great job! |