Comments : Wanting to be near you

  • 18 years ago

    by Asha

    Awesome! Loved how the first and last stanza were so similar. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Wow i love the words u used in this poem. whos it bout? well anyway very nice poem its just simply beautiful.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Very sweet! good one

    lurve Sammi

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats really cute u should just ask her the simple question already lol and yes u know what i'm talking about xox rc