This is a good poem i like it. it is such a good poem. keep it up. i almost cryed when i read this. it is an awesome poem. kudos.

Wow... i really liked this poem it was amazing... you did a wonderful job writing it... nice job and keep it up!

sammie

Great poem
the rhyming was really good too.
it kept the poem steady and didnt break the flow.
Oh, and for the comment on one of my poems, I know all about the 9/11 attacks, my uncle was killed that day, but thanks anyway.

It really is a beautiful poem... keep up the good work.

Thats so sad, so painful.
The need to hold on to something,
afraid to let go really comes out in this poem. THe emotion is so raw.

Great write.