"its kills me to have to do this"
It*
"i so sorry"
I am*
those are a couple grammatical errors that I found while reading it.. other than that, the poem was pretty good.. It was kind of redundant, but if that's the format you were going for, then great... Otherwise, I think it would be better if you made it a little longer and told the readers what it is that you have to do, because while reading this, that's all I could think of... I wanted to know what it is that you had to do, but you never told us... just to keep us guessing.. Although, again, if you were going for the mysterious ending kind of thing that allows the readers to imagine what it is you could be talking about, then you did a good job, but I think that it would be a little better if you could add that... Other than that, I liked this poem. It had emotion and it was overall pretty good... I suggest going back and trying to make it a little less repititous... Anyway, you have great potential! Keep writing!!

~BJ~