S*** THAT WAS BRILLIANT!!!!!!! Talk about spark of creativity i LOVE IT! Just brilliant, i really like the ideas behind this, truly one of a kind so Congratulations Amy, your writing better, your growing as a writer and i'm REALLY proud of you! Keep it up girl!

That was really good! i started reading it and i couldn't stop. It's got that feeling of suspense until the end. NICE!!! luv it

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That was was really well written i loved alot, keep up ur writting. xoxo Rach

I loved it .... just brilliant. never give up... u got talent

-faithfulserenity

I really liked this poem..Good job!!Everything that you feel that you can't describe when your on stage, you wrote it all down perfectly. Nice Poem, keep it up!