WOWZA - thats really good Emy and you say I'm talented you must be crazy

Yes emy... i agree with deano... WOWZA ... pmsl... gotta love dean really lol... this poem was sooo good and still is really loll...

mwah xxxx

It's short, hard hitting & powerful
the words like falling etc are like back up for the lines
you sturggle - fall
if that makes sense =s

yeh like it =]

WOW this is beautiful. So short but so good! It flows! Very well done Emily. I loved it!!!!!! -xxx- love ya, take care sweety

Oooo.....that's so blunt....short and sharp the best way to be...
MWAH I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOU!