Alone in the shadows
looking around
lying there helpless
sprawled on the ground
alone in the shadows
wanting you here
to vanish these evils
and and take away my fear
alone in the shadows
not knowing what to do
trying to feel comfort
beginning to think of you
alone in the shadows
is where I'm meant to be
covering my innocent eyes
abuse i will no longer see
abuse to the world
abuse to me
these are all things i can't bare to see
abuse from them
abuse from you
I'm all alone in the shadows
and i don't know what to do
Wow, this is really good
5\5
I liked the way you have repeated the words "alone in the shadows" through the poem.
Keep it going.
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