by The Awaken One----Josh Dec 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You tell me I cannot love a monster, |
by Kayd
I love this! It may be short, and may not be perfect to many, but it's true and perfect as anything can get. Keep it up, I'm loving your work! |
I liked the ideas in this annd the structures ok, but i think the actually organsation of the writtin gcould be improved. dont get me wrong it's good but it could be better |