I felt every single word of it, great expression! I can really relate to this! Beautiful and deep write!

Beautiful poem, but so sad. Heartwrenching tale hidden within the words. Like the smooth flow of Jazz, it isn't the words, it is the message behind the words that come through. Hang in there.....life is what life is and it constantly changes.

A great poem!! Beautifully written with deep meaning and great sadness. Hoping all will work out for you, all the best... and keep smiling :)

Gesselle,

What a lovely poem with such powerful emotions. Siento que escribas tan tristes poemas, pero espero que todo este bien. Artisticamente, este poema es perfecto: inspira emociones, y fluye muy bien. Bien hecho.

I'm sorry to hear how sad you are. but such pain is inevitable in life. a life without pain would not be to live a proper life. without those sad moments we cannot truly appreciate the good moments in life. remember: there are always better days to come, whether sooner or later. i hope you'll find happiness soon again. take care.

-PG-

Wow! I really love your poems as of late. They are shorter, which gives them this power and strong emotion to them. Great job, keep it up! :-)

Gesselle,

A very sad yet powerful write, the raw emotions and anguish which you seem to be experiencing have come out in the poem in full force. I do hope that all is well? Stay strong and keep up the good work my friend.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Hey darl. lt 0f em0ti0n in this. very heartfelt. well written! great j0b.

I can'r promise I can understand perfectly, but if you want to give me a shot at it, I am willing to try. So if you wanna take me up on that, let me know. I love this poem.

-Tainted Mikochan

I like this a lot, its how i feel like no words will explain what you have to say since the pain is so deep. 5/5 ill read more from youlater, maybe read my stuff, its not too good, but it alright iguess.. thanx good job. Lin

I like how this poem explicitly shows exactly how you feel. good job

xxx Kailani xxx

Omg, ThAt's SucH a gR8 poeM...KeeP uP WiT dA GooD....iT's sHorT bUt vErY gOOd.... -patti-

Aww thats such a beautoful poem
5/5 you deserve it girlie...
comment back please

Aww thats such a beautoful poem
5/5 you deserve it girlie...
comment back please

This is the poem I've been looking for...I feel exactly the same way. I do not know what to believe and I feel my heart is shattering. But keep your hopes up because past is the past and you can't mourn forever. You must move on because crying over it won't bring back the past. Good luck and remember, hopes up!

This is the poem I've been looking for...I feel exactly the same way. I do not know what to believe and I feel my heart is shattering. But keep your hopes up because past is the past and you can't mourn forever. You must move on because crying over it won't bring back the past. Good luck and remember, hopes up!

Wow grate poem!

Wow grate poem!