Wow..Very good. I like it

Emotions.
I like it.
It confused me though..
"no I sit here"
I didn't understand that.
But, beautiful.
Captivating.

That was really good but so sad your a great writer

-Drytears

Wow i am soooo sorry that happend to you...u really don't deserve that...and i'm sorry that u r sik in the ways that you are but please don't let it bring you down...you need to keep your head up and smile...even if it hurts... look if you ever need to talk to somebody feel free to e-mail me..i'm always here 4 u
love always
PRecIoSa

I truly understand how you feal. This hits home more than what most think. Nice way to vent some feelings.

--Sher

This is really sad. I'm so sorry this happened to you and i really hope everything is okay i don't know much about this subject at all but i know your probley feeling forever scared but i really do hope you will keep your head up high and not have people notice your depressed or even scared at somethings in life. This is a really great poem i would have to say but i'm sorry so sorry that it's true. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

ps thanks for the comment

I really love your poetry. It has such a dark beauty. No matter what obstacles life throws at you, whether or not they're real or imagined, keep writing, please!

Great job keep it up 5/5 Xox Laura Marie Xox

Pretty good, you could work on the flow a bit. But overall, nice job

The Suspense In This Poem Kept Me Reading, And Relating To Every Bit Of It, This Poem Has Inspired Me To Change My Style Of Writing *Hugs n Kisses* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow ..it was very alluring..great poem ..you have a great tallent!!!

Wow, you really have to contend with a lot, makes me feel guilty for moaning about the small things in life.

good luck mate

Hey, I loved this poem. . .It mad me really think about some issues in my life. I loved it. Seriously

I can definately relate to this poem. You are a wonderful writer. Kepp up the amazing work.. 5/5

Its very expressive , and well written also. well done

Intense poem lvoe the emotion and the style. Keep writing. I love ur name, so pretty. Anywyas i will read more lata but pleaze read more of my stuff for you i suggest, Sw33t Misery, Suicidal Romance, Somebody Please Love Her, Another Round, and Come Get Me. thnxs. XXLISSA

You write so well that I could see it clearly in my head. As I read the image came to me. Keep up the good work. *5/5*