My Love

I thought you did an excellent job.. i especially liked this line

I want to be with you forever
to hold and to Cherish
to love till the end of all time
I want you to be mine

i thought it was cute.. keep it up 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Very cliche, and over used. Yes, I know some of my poems in some way touch on this subject...but it's a little deverse. I haven't read your others material Joe, but due to the fact these types of poems are well over used and stale...3/5.

Good i like it

Yeah i did it but i didnt do it your way i did it my way lol
thanks for the help anyway
I liked the words you used but they didnt flow on to the next one sorry
but it had feeling in it
thank you
Em

Great job Im not much into love poems and I like this. I especially like this line.......................................... I want to be with you forever
to hold and to Cherish
to love till the end of all time
I want you to be mine
very heartfelt